Chapter 19
Well, I finished chapter 18. It was critiqued and now I need to finish chapter 19. I can't decide if I am writing with the idea that my reader has the same grasp on the language I do, or if they have the vocabulary of a 5th grader. I am meant to begin working on chapter 19. When chapter 18 finished, the heroine had driven a knife into the chest of the bad guy. Now the question becomes is that it? Is that enough to save herself and heal, or is stabbing him a bad idea, does it have consequences that were unforeseen. It’s a paranormal romance. Vampires and witches and magic unlike the real-world system of paganism and Wicca are being used. She’s a fairly powerful witch in her own right. I just have to figure out if and what kind of consequences, there are. Maybe stabbing him actually sets into motions a backlash from prior interactions, or her own power as a healer jumps into action and fixes the damage she created? The reason the fifth-grader question came up is often during cri...